Who is involved? Obama and Hillary.
Who does/did the situation affect? The USA.
Who said so? Brian Todd.
What is happening? Hillary might get accepted into becoming the secretary of the United States.
What did happen? Hillary is going through the vetting.
What are the consequences? Hillary not winning the spot as secretary.
What is different about this? What's different is that Hillary was running as President until she dropped ont now she running as secretary.
What are the choices? Hillary to do all she can to beome secretary and be by Obama's side to help make our world a better place.
When did or will this happen? Obama has his old friend Tom helping Hillary with becoming secretary.
When was this discovered? November 19, 2008
Where did or will this happen? This will happen very soon.
Why did this happen or will it happen? This happens because since Obama is President he need his main people to be with him halping run to country.
How did it or will it happen? this will happen through votes.
How much does it cost? nothing.
How many people does this affect? millions.
How do you feel about this? I feel that if Obama thinks Hillary will be the best person to be secretary of this countrty, then she should be.
News
Thursday, November 20, 2008
Tuesday, November 18, 2008
11/18- Rewriting
Getting it right-part1: The first step is all about gathering all your information and putting it into this great piece of work. You will have to do plenty of ruff drafts. Some you will make little changes and others you will have changed lots of things. You will have to go over and over your work to get it just right. Meaning, reading between every line.
Getting it right- part2: The thing with the second step is making sure your work makes sense. Giving every word a strong meaning to get your point across. Verbs and nouns are the most important things now. Your whole sentence has to be built upon it. It'sgoodto do a lot of comparing, quotes, and examples.
Libel: This is all about making sure you don't hurt anybody's reputation. You can say what you want but do it in a respectful way. Itreallymeans false. Don't lieabout anything, because the whole thing will blow up in your face. This can effect your writing for better or for worst.
Ethical: Behavior and the enforcement you have upon your writing are strong points. Write the truth always. Get into details about things. Do research. This part can be tricky so it's better to know every single piece or none at all.
Getting it right- part2: The thing with the second step is making sure your work makes sense. Giving every word a strong meaning to get your point across. Verbs and nouns are the most important things now. Your whole sentence has to be built upon it. It'sgoodto do a lot of comparing, quotes, and examples.
Libel: This is all about making sure you don't hurt anybody's reputation. You can say what you want but do it in a respectful way. Itreallymeans false. Don't lieabout anything, because the whole thing will blow up in your face. This can effect your writing for better or for worst.
Ethical: Behavior and the enforcement you have upon your writing are strong points. Write the truth always. Get into details about things. Do research. This part can be tricky so it's better to know every single piece or none at all.
Friday, November 7, 2008
11/07/2008
Writing- Writing is something that can be really hard or really easy. The first thing that matters is having a good story to write about. Once you got a good story focus on the theme. It's very important to focus on that part because you want to gets the most interesting thing so people would enjoy it. When writing make sure you write everything out then go back and revise to make your story greater than before.
Getting Organized- To have a good story and to put the pieces together, organization has a big impact on your story.It's good to take a lot of notes and all the ideas you have. It's good to focus on all the strong point's of your story.It's also good to start writing out the story in your head getting it ready.
Story Structure- There's a certain way your story shold be put in. Which is in some kind of structure,like an inverted pyramid. It gathers your information in way that shows you that what should be where, and it gets straight to the point, but it doesn't give a clear ending. It's all about the beginning, bringing to readers in.
The News Lead- Part 1- The lead is a sentence that explains what the story will be about. You have to pull out all the important and interesting words and qoutes from the stroy and choose which ones to use to put them in a sentence.
The News Lead- Part 2- A second lead is mostly used in stories. Its shows the feeling of the story, the attitude. When a lead isn't that strong, it's good to make sure in about the first four paragraphs your story is really exciting.
The Rest Of The Story- This section has to do with the quotes, all the things that brings the story alive.Romantic novels brings a lot of that out. It has to make the reader imagine something that could be so real.
Tools Of The Trade- This links to your five senses. Letting the reader be the character in the story. The observation is a strong point.you have to be able to describe the character nd everything around.
Getting Organized- To have a good story and to put the pieces together, organization has a big impact on your story.It's good to take a lot of notes and all the ideas you have. It's good to focus on all the strong point's of your story.It's also good to start writing out the story in your head getting it ready.
Story Structure- There's a certain way your story shold be put in. Which is in some kind of structure,like an inverted pyramid. It gathers your information in way that shows you that what should be where, and it gets straight to the point, but it doesn't give a clear ending. It's all about the beginning, bringing to readers in.
The News Lead- Part 1- The lead is a sentence that explains what the story will be about. You have to pull out all the important and interesting words and qoutes from the stroy and choose which ones to use to put them in a sentence.
The News Lead- Part 2- A second lead is mostly used in stories. Its shows the feeling of the story, the attitude. When a lead isn't that strong, it's good to make sure in about the first four paragraphs your story is really exciting.
The Rest Of The Story- This section has to do with the quotes, all the things that brings the story alive.Romantic novels brings a lot of that out. It has to make the reader imagine something that could be so real.
Tools Of The Trade- This links to your five senses. Letting the reader be the character in the story. The observation is a strong point.you have to be able to describe the character nd everything around.
Wednesday, November 5, 2008
The Election
1. What historic event happened yesterday? Yesterday Barack Obama was elected as the 44th President of the United States.
2. How will this effect your life? This will effect my life because things will start to change for the better. Since Obama is President almost everything in going to change because Bush is no long President.
3. How will this effect our country's future and the future of it's citizens? This will ffect our world because it is now in Obama's hands and he's going to do everything he can to make this a better world. Some of the choices he may make we all might not be happy with but we have to trust that he knows what he's doing.
2. How will this effect your life? This will effect my life because things will start to change for the better. Since Obama is President almost everything in going to change because Bush is no long President.
3. How will this effect our country's future and the future of it's citizens? This will ffect our world because it is now in Obama's hands and he's going to do everything he can to make this a better world. Some of the choices he may make we all might not be happy with but we have to trust that he knows what he's doing.
Monday, November 3, 2008
10/30
Three People
-The team
-The Parents
-The teachers
Questions
-How do you think football is effecting the team's education?
-Is a player committed to school like they're committed to football?
-How are the player's grades?
-Is a player always tired and sleeping in class?
-How can the player's grades come up and at the same time still do good in football?
-Should practices be cut shorter?
-Should players get extra tutoring?
-If one of the player's wasn't in football, do you think that their grades will be higher?
-How oftend does a player study?
-Is the team getting as much rest as needed?
10/28
1. Choose Topic- Football.
2. What is the issue? How much time practice takes away from learning/homework.
3. Who is involved? The parents, the team, the coaches, and the principle.
4. Who could you interview for more information? The teachers.
5. Is your topic relevant? Yes.
Will faculty, students, parents care about the issue? Yes, they will actually have an open mind to it, especially since education is the most important thing.
2. What is the issue? How much time practice takes away from learning/homework.
3. Who is involved? The parents, the team, the coaches, and the principle.
4. Who could you interview for more information? The teachers.
5. Is your topic relevant? Yes.
Will faculty, students, parents care about the issue? Yes, they will actually have an open mind to it, especially since education is the most important thing.
part 2:10/24
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